Tracked down another review of Time's Arrow
Found another review of the
Triangulation: End of Time anthology by one Charles Packer at
www.sci-fi-online.com.
The pertinent bit about my effort:
Time's Arrow is not your Enemy by Ashley Arnold is another time travel story, though this time with a warning to the possible consequences of this technology. Well written with a nice injection of wit to carry the story forward.
Which is kind of weird, because I'm not entirely sure what it is I'm warning against, but hey, it's all good.